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Old 08-09-2013, 05:09 PM   #1
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Lone wolf - WIP C4C GP5

Hey guys I'm back with some metalcore. It needs like 3 others parts and maybe a solo and all the structures will be there. I was envisaging a breakdown to follow up next but its very common to do it like that and I try to be original so maybe giving me ideas or advice would be great.
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Old 08-09-2013, 05:46 PM   #2
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I really like it !

I definitely feel like you should include a total pause of one (or two) bar(s) and then start an epic chorus (probably with two voices). What you've done this far really puts the listener into the mood and I personnally can't wait for an epic chorus starting heavily :P(actually I would have seen it a little bit sooner, like after the 54th bar, but anyway)

Though, maybe the bassline could be more interesting, but that's a very personal opinion.

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Old 08-09-2013, 06:04 PM   #3
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Yes I see what you mean and your idea is really good. And it's about time to get into the chorus so yes I will work on that. Thank you Kafiolet!

for the bassline I will let my bassist do it's work I know It's a bit simple.

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Old 08-10-2013, 01:13 AM   #4
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The drums at the end sound a little off. I edited the placement of the kicks after bar 34, tell me if it's what u meant to do.
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Old 08-10-2013, 06:46 AM   #5
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yes, it flows way better! Thank you Drapte I'll use this beat instead of mine, thank you so much.
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Old 08-12-2013, 08:24 PM   #6
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I am looking forward to the whole song, I see potential here. It was nice having a vocal track on the tab, it made the listen more entertaining, can't wait to hear the whole thing!

Feel free to check out my track: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1612453
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Old 08-12-2013, 11:36 PM   #7
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thank you! I gave you a crit on your thread and I have to say I was imprssed! I dunno when I'll finish this song... probably not soon. I'm a bit uninspired at the moment
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Old 08-14-2013, 05:10 PM   #8
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Very nice riffs I must say, the singer's melody is very melodic and adds a nice touch to the song.

I gotta say that the bass and the rhythm guitar is a bit bland...a bit more variation may make things more interesting, I guess it would fit these genre more.
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