02-24-2013, 11:42 AM
|
#1 | ||
|
Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2009
|
Acoustic Pop Song (C4C)
Just finished writing this last night, like the title says I'll C4C!
Thanks!
__________________
Quote:
Quote:
|
||
|
|
|
02-24-2013, 02:18 PM
|
#2 | ||
|
Pulling straws at random
Join Date: May 2008
|
Sounds like what my mum listens to on her contemporary christian worship radio stations.
__________________
Quote:
Quote:
|
||
|
|
|
|
02-25-2013, 11:35 AM
|
#3 | |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Netherlands
|
Quote:
can't you just give real feedback instead of being condescending and basically shitting out verbal diarrea ? anyway on to the crit i liked the intro it was pretty ok , the vocal line ( at least i think it was ) was pretty uninteresting imo. nice transition to the chords after that , building up on what was allready there after that its just rinse and repeat it seems , i dont think it really works with the gp version but i think with real instruments it would definetly work though. 7/10 Can you crit Elation ? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588978
__________________
My songs : The Holy Crusade Hold The Line The Age of War Ride Forever Free The Alamo Fading Away Glory and Honor In Flanders Fields Roma Victor Elation |
|
|
|
|
|
03-02-2013, 03:11 PM
|
#4 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2007
|
I thought it was good. Guitar pro does make it sound a little like something you'd hear in the sims.
It's nice to hear something not metal on here! good work! |
|
|
|
|
03-02-2013, 03:18 PM
|
#5 |
|
UG's derby Spike
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Israel
|
Simple, catchy and very sweet though somewhat melancholic.
I liked it, it's a fantastic pop song. Very well made too. How long did it take you to write this?
__________________
Leave Israel alone! E-Married to JGBSmith! Member of the LGBTQQ group. |
|
|
|
|
03-17-2013, 02:00 PM
|
#6 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: at home
|
Very catchy song! I love it. The intro is a real hum-a-long.
When the acoustic guitar comes in it's just perfect. As someone before mentioned, it is very melancholic but it's not a bad thing. I hope you were going for that style of sound. Keep up the good work mate! |
|
|
|
|
03-17-2013, 02:20 PM
|
#7 | ||
|
UG Freak
Join Date: Oct 2009
|
Quote:
__________________
Quote:
|
||
|
|
|
|
03-17-2013, 04:17 PM
|
#8 | |||
|
Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2009
|
Quote:
Thank you for the very detailed crit, you ass. Just go back to the pit.
__________________
Quote:
Quote:
|
|||
|
|
|
|
03-17-2013, 05:48 PM
|
#9 | ||
|
UG Freak
Join Date: Oct 2009
|
Quote:
I tend to give detailed crits, just whenever I want to. I just found that post so mean it was funny lol. I could crit this song, but now I won't 
__________________
Quote:
|
||
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | Rate This Thread | |
|
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:06 AM.