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Old 01-04-2013, 01:14 AM   #1
rushmore
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fox meat

drunk dizzy on
fox meat. M’s throat
sore from mugs of
salt sea)”our organs are
fruit,
essentially”
(her)
“i suppose i
cannot disagree”
(me)

yawn.
y
a
wn.
y
aw
n.

in sleep she
looks like a
giant grasshoppers
exoskeleton &
i want to crawl
inside and feel
around.

yawn.
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Old 01-04-2013, 07:21 PM   #2
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Not sure if I'm pulling away what was meant, but I dug it. It reminded me of sleeping next to my girlfriend drunk, knowing I probably wanted to have sex, but I'm too tired.
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Old 01-06-2013, 05:16 PM   #3
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Someone's been reading Cummings. Thoroughly enjoyed this though.
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Old 01-07-2013, 06:25 PM   #4
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This was really fun to read
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