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Old 01-08-2013, 05:52 PM   #1
tomrgane
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Acoustic demos

Working my way up to an acoustic EP so I've been demoing some songs just using my phone to record and just wondering if I could get some feedback before going on to proper recording. Here's what's probably the best two, or at least my favourite, songs so far, wondering if anyone could give me their opinions. Happy to return the favour.

https://soundcloud.com/thomas-gane/beneath-the-sheets

https://soundcloud.com/thomas-gane/...otball-mornings

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Old 01-08-2013, 09:38 PM   #2
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Hey man.

I really like the guitar playing in the songs. Catchy rhythms, and some pretty good melodies as well. Vocals sound a bit shaky, but i really cant say much as i know you recorded them on your phone. Nice work though, Peaceful tracks. I especially like intro on a kind shy smile. Im a huge City and Colour fan, if you know who they are so anything acoustic is always awesome to me. Keep up the good work, I'd love to hear more.

If you have time give my track a listen, just an instrumental vocals are coming soon..


http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1581719
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Old 01-09-2013, 02:04 AM   #3
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tom,
"Sheets": The guitar sounds pleasant, nice playing & audio. Vocals need work, but keep at it! "Hate": same comment on vocals. Guitar riffs sound good, remind me of Violent Femmes. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...88#post30865488
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