12-11-2012, 04:22 PM
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Git-Man
Join Date: Jun 2006
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upbeat acoustic tune "all i fear" C4C
here is my latest song "all i fear". it has a bit of a east coast maritime feel. my family is from newfoundland so i tried to add some of the east coast feel and put it into basically a pop song i guess. will C4C but i am busy so i will try my hardest to do so
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vs-m...eature=youtu.be
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12-12-2012, 01:05 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2010
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Blind,
There is no try, only do or do not. Guitar playing & melodies are good. Singing is pretty good overall, vocal melodies are good. Around 3:50 seems to need some vocals or fade it out earlier. Drums are fine. Song is nice. Please review my music at this link: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...09#post30732509 |
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12-12-2012, 11:22 AM
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Git-Man
Join Date: Jun 2006
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lol there is such a thing as trying. i really hate that quote when it's not used as a motivator in sports. thanks though i'll check it out.
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12-13-2012, 02:29 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Dear Blind
Enjoyed listening to your track, as I have enjoyed listening to your other work having subscribed to your fine channel. "All I fear" is great, but, as Aaron suggests, something has to happen at the end of the vocals. I don't think more vocals is the answer. A fade out would be possible. How about, suddenly cutting the drums and switching to some fancy strum patterns or finger picking? Or may be putting a clean melodic solo over the top? Having heard your other material, you've got all the skills to do something that adds to the song at the end and brings it to a fitting close. Please review my effort at: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1577569 All the best Phil Last edited by CarsickPhil : 12-13-2012 at 02:38 PM. |
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12-14-2012, 02:25 PM
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Git-Man
Join Date: Jun 2006
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thanks and i do agree. what i really wanted to do was speed it up at the end and do some other things over top but my recorder is pretty much dead and i wanted to finish the vocals and just get that done before it craps out. i will probably cut a better version once i get my new laptop. i couldn't really speed it up though as i was playing to a drum track. but i've been working on getting a band together so look forward to more full band/rock stuff and more electric stuff as well.
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