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Old 01-08-2013, 12:48 AM   #1
Final
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WotW : "deltitnu"

drunk -

"deltitnu"

replace my organs with
circuits and wires;
the bipolarity of a manic depressive:
droll and garish yet weathered.
an automaton lavished with emotion,
confused as to a purpose,
portraying that of a human.
"the world seems a better place
when i'm not about."
- multiple system failure;
power down,
power down,
power dow..
po..
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Old 01-14-2013, 01:47 PM   #2
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Solid piece. Well deserved.
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Old 01-14-2013, 04:03 PM   #3
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yeah i love this
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Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
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Old 01-14-2013, 06:22 PM   #4
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so happy you're posting
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Old 01-15-2013, 01:51 PM   #5
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Good to have you back, mate.
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Old 01-17-2013, 11:14 PM   #6
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You know, I would have never thought this would have been a wotw piece, and that's awesome, my first one, haha, thank you guys, really, thank you; I hope to start posting more regularly again.
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Old 01-29-2013, 11:47 AM   #7
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What I loved about this piece is your word choice. How beautifully crafted are the words you chose to put out of and between quotation marks. That divide that puts us here or there. Mechanical or human, electronic or emotional. I connect to that on many levels. I have an iphone after all.

multiple system(s) bothered me. pedantic.

Good. good.
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Old 02-02-2013, 03:57 PM   #8
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Thank you Carm, your words are always appreciated.
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