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Old 12-23-2012, 11:16 PM   #1
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melodic metal(work in progress) C4C

Been working on this for a few days.

Tell me what you think so far, what I could do to improve it, etc.

Will C4C if you give me a link.
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Old 12-24-2012, 07:03 AM   #2
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The half timing drums during the end of the last solo sounds pretty poop.


Thats pretty much the only thing I can think of thats bad about it, so take that for what you will. Seriously, its got some good stuff in there.
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Old 12-24-2012, 11:56 AM   #3
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Thanks for the feedback, I edited the ending drums a little, hopefully it sounds better.
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Old 12-24-2012, 01:42 PM   #4
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The intro reminds me of After The burial. I didn't like the section at gminor. It didn't work to me. Good use of the synths and the leads were nice.
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Old 12-25-2012, 03:59 AM   #5
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IMO, it's pretty well structured song. I love the delay usage during 0:22 onwards (sorry, i only listen to the MIDI, my pc have no guitar pro at the moment) but, the drum at around 2:00 is kinda off...

otherwise, it's pretty good song. I also love the piano part at 1:05 - 1:22

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Old 12-25-2012, 05:59 AM   #6
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Honestly, that's one of the most melodic pieces I've ever seen on this site. Really nice work.
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