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Old 02-13-2013, 05:43 PM   #1
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"REvolt" (original track)

Any feedback is highly appreciated (yeah the tempo is a bit off. Sorry for that)

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Old 02-13-2013, 06:41 PM   #2
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Since I'm not really a guitar virtuoso, I'll just comment on this as a listener if that's okay. I like the intro but as you go into the song, it gets kind of predictable and shaky in a way that it doesn't get progressively awesomer than the intro itself. I think it could sound better if you gave it a huge crescendo moment riff near the end of the song. Idk, just my two cents.


P.S: The solo kinda reminds me of Muse's Showbiz and Survival which is fantastic. Great work.
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Old 02-13-2013, 06:47 PM   #3
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I liked the rhythm of it. It reminded of the Black Keys a little, only a little.

I really liked it. Not really any info about it, did you play the instruments yourself or do you have a band?

Add some vocals, would be great! Over all, I liked it, the structure and the flow of the song, it doesn't really need vocals either though. Cool how it is.
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Old 02-13-2013, 11:51 PM   #4
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this kind of reminded me of muse like the guy above said. the drums are a bit repetitive and the riff is slightly brand, but still quite catchy. your a good guitar player, i liked the delayed type of soloing that starts around 50 - 1:05, then when the strings kicked in it was quite dope. starts out slow but really gets epic after the first minute, i was surprised!

good work man. c4c my song? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588042
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Old 02-14-2013, 05:01 AM   #5
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Sounds like it would be awesome music for a dramatic sequence in a film of some sort. Not too shabby at all.
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Old 02-14-2013, 10:29 AM   #6
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I agree with Zep, it would sound very cool in a movie. Good work.
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Old 02-15-2013, 12:09 AM   #7
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I liked the rhythm of it. It reminded of the Black Keys a little, only a little.

I really liked it. Not really any info about it, did you play the instruments yourself or do you have a band?

Add some vocals, would be great! Over all, I liked it, the structure and the flow of the song, it doesn't really need vocals either though. Cool how it is.


I played everything by myself. Point to note though is that the string sections and drums are VST instruments but recorded live.
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Old 02-15-2013, 12:11 AM   #8
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this kind of reminded me of muse like the guy above said. the drums are a bit repetitive and the riff is slightly brand, but still quite catchy. your a good guitar player, i liked the delayed type of soloing that starts around 50 - 1:05, then when the strings kicked in it was quite dope. starts out slow but really gets epic after the first minute, i was surprised!

good work man. c4c my song? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588042


wow it is really impressive. I feel like if you had a good studio setup it would have sounded way better. Just an opinion: the drum feels a bit off to the feel of the guitar. Otherwise, great job!
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