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Old 06-27-2012, 06:59 PM   #1
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"The Mess I Made" (Cover) (C4C)

Hey Guys, this is my cover of the mess I made by parachute. Your honest critique will be greatly appreciated!



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Old 06-28-2012, 06:13 AM   #2
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Hey man, great cover! I really dig your voice and the way you singing the song, it sounds very accurate to me and its nice to see you enhoy performing it. Can't say nothing bad for the playing. Great job man!

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Old 07-05-2012, 05:37 PM   #3
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No more C4C's or comments? I promise a critique back
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Old 07-20-2012, 10:30 PM   #4
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Great stuff man! You have a really great voice and the guitar playing was good also! A great cover all around, keep it up!
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Old 07-25-2012, 09:15 AM   #5
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Thanks for the comment man im glad you liked it!
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Old 07-25-2012, 09:19 AM   #6
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Nice cover! I can't really comment on the vocals because I know nothing about them haha. They sound really good though, and your guitar playing is really good too. All together, it's really nice to listen to. Great job!

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Old 07-25-2012, 07:55 PM   #7
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Thanks for the crit dude! I left a critique on your cover too!
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Old 07-26-2012, 10:16 AM   #8
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Good stuff man! You've got a very singer-songwriter style voice! Works great with the acoustic

I've commented on the video as AnkushJainMusic

If you could C4C mine, that would be great! Please could you comment on the actual YouTube video?
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Old 07-27-2012, 08:34 PM   #9
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Thanks a lot man! It really means a lot! I left a comment on your YouTube video just like you asked, keep it up!
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Old 07-29-2012, 11:57 PM   #10
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Old 08-03-2012, 03:44 AM   #11
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Hey man loved it a lot, great job keep it up!

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Old 08-03-2012, 11:48 PM   #12
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Sounds good man. Only thing i would suggest is get a better camera or set the guitar up through a mike, just so you can hear the vocals and guitar better good job
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Old 08-03-2012, 11:50 PM   #13
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Sounds good man. Only thing i would suggest is get a better camera or set the guitar up through a mike, just so you can hear the vocals and guitar better. At 2:00 ish it seems like your having a bit of trouble with those higher notes. Just try bushing from the diaphram more and you'll get them easier good job
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Old 08-05-2012, 09:26 PM   #14
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Thanks man I'll keep that in mind! Haha I've only started singing a couple months ago so with practice I'm sure I'll get better at the high notes :p
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Old 08-06-2012, 02:55 PM   #15
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Hey man, seeing your last comment about how you only started to sing a couple month ago, it's really impressive the cover you pulled off. At least for me, cause I couldn't sing to save my life.

I like how you do these high pitched 'oooh's at around 2:45, adds a nice touch imo.
Also the 'as you goooooooooo' still towards the end, i liek dat.
Downsides would be the camera, no fault of your own though.

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Old 08-07-2012, 01:31 AM   #16
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I have to be honest I've never heard of Parachute or this band, but great job brother!

My only criticisms would have to be that sometimes as you hit notes you would hit them correctly but would drift flat/sharp (depending on the note). Also be careful to watch your drift from note to note, you want it to be instantaneous moving note to note.

Disclaimer : I'm not a singer so i couldn't give you technical advice, but i do have experience producing several vocalists so I'm not bsing haha

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Old 08-08-2012, 01:21 PM   #17
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Thanks for the kind and Honest critiques guys! I really appreciate it! I did you guys c4cs also
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Old 08-08-2012, 03:13 PM   #18
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Sounds awesome man. Great playing and your voice is awesome. It falls flat occasionally, but hey, it happens. You should get some recording equipment and start messing around with it. Being able to do more than just a Youtube recording will really help you expand what you can create.

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Old 08-08-2012, 06:20 PM   #19
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Yeah really well done. Good voice, a couple notes were off here and there, but mostly it was really good, and the acoustic sounds nice as well. The only thing I would suggest is maybe investing in some recording equipment, but other than that really solid cover

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Old 06-29-2013, 07:53 AM   #20
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Not sure if I can bring back this old of a thread but I'd be more than happy to do more C4C's on it!
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