01-02-2013, 01:54 PM
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Discipline me more!
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Kyyiv, Ukraine
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Another song on 8-string [Riftwalker - No Time For Better Choice] (no vocals)
Hi guys,
another song is finished (instrumental. I have tried to achieve thicker guitar tone, so, I added a little more bass on guitar amp, looks like it works. Also, used some wub-wub (dubstep busses) on verses. Listen and comment, thanks 
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01-02-2013, 02:17 PM
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Sr Bartolomew Shredman IV
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Paris, France
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Hey!
Nice melody. I also like the groove, with the metal rhythm from 0:47. I'm not a fan of dubsteb licks, but here it fits good with the song I found it cool! My only regret was that there were no solos! You could have done an epic guitar solo at 2:30, even a little one, and go back at the clean riff! Good work!  Sounded a bit like a video game soundtrack!If you want to, you can give me an opinion on my music |
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01-02-2013, 04:24 PM
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Muchacho Moderno
Join Date: Dec 2012
Location: Deep in the Heart of Texas
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Nice build up in the intro!
0:40 & 1:25 - I like the change - came just in time. 1:40 - the the high riff and echo... Since it is an instrumental track, I would like to hear a little more ear candy (Solo or the like). I still think it has solid legs, just needs a little suga' in there to sweeten the mix! If you can I would appreciate a listen to my drivel - https://soundcloud.com/dances-with-...nd-of-the-funky Keep Rockin'! DWS |
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01-04-2013, 11:03 AM
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Discipline me more!
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Kyyiv, Ukraine
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Thanks, sure, but where I should comment it? For my ear your song has unbalanced mix - guitars should be louder and wider, vocals are too loud. Another thing, all instruments are in their own spaces, so, mix doesn't sound as one piece. You can try to add more variation in drum parts, it will sound better. Your music is interesting and I like the atmosphere, but you should try to achieve better mix, IMO.
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