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Old 08-02-2013, 01:45 AM   #1
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let it all work out, let it keep your tongue discipline
let it start on slow, may your smile seep within.
honey i knew i loved you before i even met you -
those stars above you, they were meant to
shine inside the chasms that we can't ignore.
high school years passed, and college once more;
there were things that neither lectures nor age could implore -
love can only reach those who reach for it, and so it goes.
here, My Dear, here it is

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Old 08-02-2013, 03:11 AM   #2
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sometimes the things that most need to be said are the things that should be said in the plainest terms. good stuff man. also good to see you around
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Old 08-04-2013, 04:33 PM   #3
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I've really, really missed rhyming schemes. Eloquent, simple, beautiful, it's been a long time since I've read rhymes that didn't sound forced and cheesy. Not a clue what the title means though..
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Old 08-04-2013, 06:35 PM   #4
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Old 08-06-2013, 11:40 AM   #5
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this is calm. it reads your sweetness just as well. I'll be happy to see where you go
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it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist

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Old 08-09-2013, 04:06 PM   #6
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thanks everyone for the kind words. and thanks for the wotw, i appreciate it
here, My Dear, here it is
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