Go Back   UG Community @ Ultimate-Guitar.Com > Music > Recordings > Tabs & Chords
User Name  
Password
Search:

Reply
Old 02-03-2013, 01:22 AM   #1
Illustration
Iconoclast
 
Illustration's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Brisbane, AU
Deathcore attempt (gp5)

Still pretty new to writing. This would be like my 3rd song.
Pretty basic stuff.

T'would be good to get some criticism.
Attached Files
File Type: gp5 project.gp5 (46.8 KB, 120 views)

Last edited by Illustration : 02-03-2013 at 01:24 AM.
Illustration is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-03-2013, 07:17 AM   #2
NegiTom
Registered User
 
Join Date: Nov 2010
So. Many. Open. Notes.
I don't understand why you would want to attempt to write deathcore, but congratulations, you succeeded in writing infallibly generic deathcore. You captured "da br00tz" of every other deathcore band perfectly with your breakdown, followed by breakdown, followed by breakdown.
chug-a-lug-dosomethingelse
NegiTom is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-03-2013, 12:22 PM   #3
Illustration
Iconoclast
 
Illustration's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Brisbane, AU
Well I was going to title it Basicore but I didn't think the humour would be appreciated.

Last edited by Illustration : 02-03-2013 at 12:25 PM.
Illustration is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-03-2013, 12:33 PM   #4
CheesyMozarella
Slacker
 
Join Date: May 2009
It was very generic, but that doesn't matter as long as you learn something from it and don't write the same song next time. The first couple of songs are bound to be generic. It takes a while before you find "your style".
__________________
GP songs:
Dreamstate
Life

Soundcloud:
https://soundcloud.com/laserost

Last edited by CheesyMozarella : 02-03-2013 at 12:44 PM.
CheesyMozarella is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-03-2013, 12:41 PM   #5
Illustration
Iconoclast
 
Illustration's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Brisbane, AU
Thanks man.
Really liked the stuff you wrote in the UG collabs.
Especially Bar 444 of 30 minute mark. That riff gave me chills the first time I heard it.
Illustration is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:32 PM.

Forum Archives / About / Terms of Use / Advertise / Contact / Ultimate-Guitar.Com © 2014
Powered by: vBulletin Version 3.0.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.