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Old 11-05-2012, 07:45 PM   #1
Pond Scum
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C4c Metal Tune

Song 14

Take a listen let me know what ya hate or like.

I'll return the favor.

muchass grassyass
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Old 11-08-2012, 04:56 AM   #2
NelsonSFS
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not bad dude but a few things, ur guitar tone has a tad bit too much drive, use a screamer to get more gain without cranking distortion remember less is more its better to have two low gain guitars play than one cranked, second i noticed a little bit of fizz in the guitars that might be bc of the gain but deff use a low pass filter to cut that out u dont need anything higher than about 10-12k for guitars, and lastly i cant really hear the kick, other than that its a nice track dude heres mine im new to this myself lemm know what u think!
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1571760
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Old 11-08-2012, 06:07 PM   #3
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I actually really like this tune ! The kick drum has a lil too much reverb for my taste and your distorted guitar needs to be low-shelved and the midrange shud push thru more on your guitars. Overall a really nice track. Reminds me of old-school metal tunes.

Keep up the good work !

C4C ?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1572038
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Old 11-09-2012, 02:12 AM   #4
aaron aardvark
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Mr. Pond Scum,
Too much distortion on the guitar at 0:55. If there is electric bass I can't hear it well. I like the riffs, some really rock. Could use some vocals. Drums are fine. This has real potential. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1571779
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