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Old 01-09-2013, 01:25 AM   #1
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[GP5.2] C4C Metalcore Song

Not quite sure how to really categorize this tab, but I'd probably say metalcore. Any criticism/suggestions or praise (mainly praise!) would be appreciated.

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ps, don't be harsh on the drums, I have no idea how to write them, just added as filler in some parts.
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Old 01-09-2013, 01:57 PM   #2
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The synths dont work with any of your riffs, so leave them out for now.

The sudden key/scale swap at bar 32 doesn't work either.

16-18 the riffs are alright, if too diatonically simple, but the underlying chords dont work at all.

Bar 43-47 I like the idea, but it resolves too quickly. Try this order: 43, 44, 45, 47, 43, 44, 45, 46.

Aisde that its metalcore, so inb4 people saying epi's a douche, inb4 omgus, inb4 me.
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Old 01-09-2013, 03:45 PM   #3
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Old 01-10-2013, 08:56 PM   #4
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Alright cool thanks man, glad some of the stuff I have in there is decent.

I can see how that one part at 32 doesn't work, can definitely try to re-work that, but when you say the chords in 16-18 are not good... what would you suggest for that?
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Old 01-10-2013, 09:30 PM   #5
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I think there are some good riff scattering around the song....but, overall, it's a pretty decent ideas of metalcore song...

for the bar 18, i think you don't need to use 5/4 time signature...try to change it to 4/4 and use D and E chord in half note for each chord. And then change the riff to match the 4/4 time signature... (check out the attachment)

bar 42 - 47 is a pretty good part, I like it...

C4C?

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1577897
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Old 01-11-2013, 07:13 AM   #6
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Added some harmonic corrections, a riff variation here and there to make it sound more melodic, also changed the underlying chords for 16-18.
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