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Old 04-09-2013, 04:01 PM   #1
seventh_angel
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Tandem

We bought a tandem on black Friday,
paid for it with uncertainty
and received trust as change. Since we
built a shed with our bare hands
and everyone got disgusted
of our callused palms, we had to hold
our scars with fingers intertwined
and self-teach our way across familiar pine
trees; falling together on splinters
and spending the night experimenting
with ligatures. Tumble by tumble,
we ended up pedaling in sync,

but now Iím going downhill
and youíve cut both brake lines.
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Old 04-10-2013, 10:06 AM   #2
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Old 04-16-2013, 08:27 PM   #3
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This begins strong- I like that you built it with your hands. You're going along and taking things in stride. Very good, keep moving forward.
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Old 04-17-2013, 03:33 PM   #4
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there's so much about this i love, i don't know where to start...
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Old 04-18-2013, 12:04 PM   #5
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Thank you so much
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Old 04-22-2013, 03:06 AM   #6
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More later, but for now, it's brake not break in this case. But that's just me being negative and silly.


Also, what piece of yours did I black dot? It seems to have disappeared :s
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Old 04-22-2013, 05:36 AM   #7
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Silly typo, thanks for pointing it out. You blackdotted Like An Iron Bar, Alec. At least I think so.
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