12-02-2012, 08:02 AM
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New Metal song (Prog or Whatever) (GP5) (C4C)
I was bored yesterday so i started to write this song. It's not ready yet. So tell me what you think
 And C4CEDIT: I added couple new riffs. I'm not sure if they fit into the context  They are kinda weird. But give your opinions
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12-02-2012, 09:57 AM
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Pretty decent actually, first riff has an interesting chord in it. Needs bass though.
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12-02-2012, 09:58 AM
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24th and 25th bar sounds like Tool's Lateralus ripoff.
I like the rest of the song.
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12-02-2012, 11:25 AM
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Thanks! Thats interesting as i have not heard that Tool song before
I'm gonna check it out
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12-02-2012, 01:05 PM
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This demands bass guitar!
I could do bass tracks for u if u want, im damn bored
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12-02-2012, 01:43 PM
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Go ahead! I'm too lazy to write them
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12-03-2012, 11:42 AM
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Digging the heavy bits.....intro was kinda creepy, works well, but feels kinda barebones? I can imagine some drone chords/ambient-y sounds there.....
Needs bass as previously mentioned  AND double bass......a few 16th note triplets here and there would spice it up nicely. The later bits have a really swell groove to them. Maybe add some ambient bits, like after the chorus in Old Days Born Anew by Textures? A lead line would work well towards the end as well.
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12-03-2012, 01:11 PM
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Small bass ideas here
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12-03-2012, 04:16 PM
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Not too bad actually! You mind if i use that one on the first post?
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12-06-2012, 08:39 AM
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sure, if you like them
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