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Old 07-28-2013, 02:00 PM   #1
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stuck on the taste of future lust -
that which consumes you must eventually shit you out,
but I've found a nice list of gluttons.


the cells of the body regenerate
until we are new organs mixed with the old;
several people through the vessel of one system
(the corpus),
several souls I have developed
all teeming in some realm that I
create but cannot access.






matthew, I remember you
like a dream about myself that I
cannot wake up from -
what we said was the same,
a confirmation, a
narration on
narration.
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Old 07-30-2013, 11:21 PM   #2
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Old 08-01-2013, 04:43 PM   #3
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in five years time when we look back on our lives, then read again the poems we have posted here, then with a bottle of red wine half empty, then with a knowing smile.

may we never figure out where warmth resides. some things are best kept hidden.
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Old 08-02-2013, 01:47 AM   #4
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i love that you still write. i love that you still share what you write. please don't stop doing either
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Old 08-04-2013, 09:29 PM   #5
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i love that you still write. i love that you still share what you write. please don't stop doing either


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Old 08-10-2013, 11:31 AM   #6
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thank you, my darlings
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Old 08-11-2013, 07:52 PM   #7
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i love that you still write. i love that you still share what you write. please don't stop doing either


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Old 08-13-2013, 11:01 AM   #8
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my name is matthew and i am quite flattered.

just kidding. only gripe was "must shit you out." but that's a personal taste more than a legit critique.
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Old 08-15-2013, 05:01 PM   #9
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in five years time when we look back on our lives, then read again the poems we have posted here, then with a bottle of red wine half empty, then with a knowing smile.

may we never figure out where warmth resides. some things are best kept hidden.


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