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Old 02-07-2013, 05:46 PM   #1
RisingForce1990
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My Only Regret

I saw you sleeping
That cold December night
You looked so peaceful
Didn't want to cause you fright
My only regret, is that I didn't pat your head
My only regret, that I didn't sit beside your bed
My only regret, that our last conversation was a fight
My only regret, I didn't give you one last kiss goodnight
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You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
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Old 02-08-2013, 03:40 PM   #2
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Right on. A few more verses, and you'd have a murder ballad.
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Old 02-10-2013, 01:55 PM   #3
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I agree with Nilchii. This looks like a good piece in the making Would love to see it expanded a bit...looking forward to it
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