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Old 11-20-2012, 10:19 AM   #1
g0ze
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Still Ascending (Gp5) Metalcore

A song i wrote for an upcoming album.
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Old 11-20-2012, 05:07 PM   #2
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Everything but the chorus is awesome. Chorus doesn't work for me because of the link. You'll hear what I mean, I think, in the first few seconds.

Other than that, sure, it's well constructed, it stays away from most genericore cliches, not really much wrong with it. Structure was a bit predictable, but that's nit picking.

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1566286
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Old 11-20-2012, 08:38 PM   #3
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You wouldn't happen to like Architects would you?
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Old 11-20-2012, 09:18 PM   #4
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You wouldn't happen to like Architects would you?

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Old 11-21-2012, 06:25 AM   #5
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Why you ask?


I reckon I can point out 3 or 4 things about this song, possibly more, that are directly and strongly influenced by Architects songs. Whilst the end product doesn't sounds exactly like them, for a fan it's quite clear it see.
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Old 11-21-2012, 12:10 PM   #6
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So very Architects. Not a bad thing though.

If I were you I'd separate the chord voicing over the two guitars. I was wearing headphones and my ears were blew off from how much was going on especially in the chorus with the string ensemble. It's just too much. I think it would sound better too.

Apart from that I like it.
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