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Old 12-02-2012, 08:02 AM   #1
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New Metal song (Prog or Whatever) (GP5) (C4C)

I was bored yesterday so i started to write this song. It's not ready yet. So tell me what you think And C4C


EDIT: I added couple new riffs. I'm not sure if they fit into the context They are kinda weird. But give your opinions
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Old 12-02-2012, 09:57 AM   #2
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Pretty decent actually, first riff has an interesting chord in it. Needs bass though.
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Old 12-02-2012, 09:58 AM   #3
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24th and 25th bar sounds like Tool's Lateralus ripoff.
I like the rest of the song.
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Old 12-02-2012, 11:25 AM   #4
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Thanks! Thats interesting as i have not heard that Tool song before I'm gonna check it out
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Old 12-02-2012, 01:05 PM   #5
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This demands bass guitar! I could do bass tracks for u if u want, im damn bored
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Old 12-02-2012, 01:43 PM   #6
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This demands bass guitar! I could do bass tracks for u if u want, im damn bored


Go ahead! I'm too lazy to write them
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Old 12-03-2012, 11:42 AM   #7
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Digging the heavy bits.....intro was kinda creepy, works well, but feels kinda barebones? I can imagine some drone chords/ambient-y sounds there.....
Needs bass as previously mentioned

AND double bass......a few 16th note triplets here and there would spice it up nicely.

The later bits have a really swell groove to them. Maybe add some ambient bits, like after the chorus in Old Days Born Anew by Textures? A lead line would work well towards the end as well.
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Old 12-03-2012, 01:11 PM   #8
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Small bass ideas here
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Old 12-03-2012, 04:16 PM   #9
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Small bass ideas here


Not too bad actually! You mind if i use that one on the first post?
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Old 12-06-2012, 08:39 AM   #10
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sure, if you like them
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