02-02-2013, 01:55 AM
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Lyrics first try
Trying to make a non generic song I don't want metalcore labels or anything really. So here we go
 "I'm just so tired My eyes are bloodshot My future gray My mind dug deep into the ground Hey!!! Just give me another moment here to waste away!!! The bright nights!! The dark lights!!! The Hate,the pain, won't go away" All I got for now, I want feedback positive and negative. |
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02-02-2013, 04:27 AM
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pretty cliche` and angsty but if this is your first attempt then that's excusable, just keep writing and you'll get better
pretty generic soz lol |
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02-03-2013, 03:29 AM
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Thanks  for real feedback I hate asking my friends for them lol |
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