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Old 11-11-2012, 01:10 PM   #1
rushmore
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WotW : metamorphoo

oh,
all the big
trees/
no snow no
sleet no
sleeves,
that which
accompanies the
growth of
me(
bearded in
wander.
i sit,
sometimes,
other times
walk/
eyes glass'd with
another someones
thought; limbs
carrying me along,
mind tired, lazy,
dumb &
gone.
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Old 11-12-2012, 03:38 AM   #2
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this is really beautiful man. i think it reads better without "sleet no" but who am i to say?

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Old 11-12-2012, 06:17 PM   #3
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ooh. and I like sleet.
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Old 11-23-2012, 01:04 AM   #4
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really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!
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Old 11-28-2012, 03:48 AM   #5
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oops, forgot to stick this.
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Old 12-01-2012, 10:18 PM   #6
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thanks for this.
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Old 12-02-2012, 04:49 AM   #7
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really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!


woah another ghost! hope you've been doing well.


On topic, this is really nice. You're good with controlling sounds.
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Old 12-03-2012, 04:27 AM   #8
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my poetry review tumblr-submit poetry for publishing on the page. contact me if you'd like to help me with this.

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