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Old 10-05-2013, 01:11 PM   #1
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Just a little instrumental thing I've been working on. All comments or criticism welcome
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Old 10-05-2013, 06:47 PM   #2
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It starts weak but it grows to something good. The solo is very nice but you repeat a bit too much your main riff for a progressive song. Anyway it was good!
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Old 10-06-2013, 01:04 PM   #3
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I liked basically all the riffs but the structure could worked, maybe the drums specifically. Constantly intense almost.
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Old 10-06-2013, 01:57 PM   #4
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I liked basically all the riffs but the structure could worked

This. Good riffs, but they are repeated too often. And the drums are weird.
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Old 10-06-2013, 05:42 PM   #5
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Loved all the riffs! While I do agree on the intensity, I haven't made up my mind yet if it's a bad thing or not.
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Old 10-06-2013, 08:56 PM   #6
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this definitely sounds cool, but i agree with craziork; it is pretty repetitive. otherwise, i really dont have much to complain about. i liked the bass a lot
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Old 10-06-2013, 09:21 PM   #7
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Noted about the repetition. I noticed that myself but I liked it sort of. And yeah the drums are intense like the whole time because I felt like the guitar was really melody focused so I wanted the drums and bass to drive the song. Thanks for listening.
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Old 10-07-2013, 09:58 PM   #8
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I felt like that main riff should have been played once, it ended perfectly with bar 8, and from there everything should have kicked in but it should have been a different riff. Or, just delete the first 9 bars, then change the riff at 18. At 61 is the first time it should repeat again. It's a great riff don't get me wrong, but progressive songs are almost never driven with one riff.

the bass at 93 is really good.
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