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Old 01-31-2013, 04:43 PM   #1
Blinker4ever
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Someday

You may be out there,
and i may be here
But i won't stop intil i'm near
My love from somewhere, somewhere out there
My love from the dream yesterday

Someday
I'll know i'll find the one
I'll say
with no delay at all
I never let you go

As you stood there
My eyes got caught
on your lips and your butt
The best i've ever seen
It was like a dream
A dream from yesterday

Someday
I'll know i'll find the one
I'll say
with no delay at all
I will never let you go

heres the full song : youtube .com /watch?v=z4vECsqzDXk

Please tell me what you think about it and how i can improve it
This is my first song i've ever wrote so..

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