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Hi guys. I'm trying to get a little motivated about my songwriting, so I'd appreciate if you could give me some feedback (specially on grammar, since English is not my first language). Let's see what you think of this song. I hope you like it.

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Baby I can't hear
Your footsteps in the rain
The laughter of your silhouette
That's leaving for the day

And don't be afraid
To live just for today
Tomorrow goes through lonely roads
Where the future's in shades

Maybe one day we'll be wide awake
We'll be strong enough to make it through the rain
Or throw away the pain

What did I learn, you asked, from my past mistakes?
Well maybe I don't care and I just wanna run away
I'm leaving here today

I'm gonna find a place to stay away

Baby I can't hear
Your footsteps in the rain
The laughter of your silhouette
That's leaving for the day

And don't be afraid
To live just for today
Tomorrow goes through lonely roads
Where the future's in shades

I should have stayed when the final days came
'Cause today's a loss and it's a shame to be strong
When everybody's given up

Maybe your shadow falls from the Angel's throne
But I'm a mortal man and I can't breath for long enough
To dive into your perfect world

I'm gonna make sure the sun lighten up your days

Baby I can't hear
Your footsteps in the rain
The laughter of your silhouette
That's leaving for the day

And don't be afraid
To live just for today
Tomorrow goes through lonely roads
Where the future's in shades

Escape from me and I'll be lost
Escapa from your future while there is still hope
But I must keep going on

Sure thing sunshine warms enough
Never fading, never ending light
But nightime feels so long

Tomorrow's the day I'm taking on the world

Baby I can't hear
Your footsteps in the rain
The laughter of your silhouette
That's leaving for the day

And don't be afraid
To live just for today
Tomorrow goes through lonely roads
Where the future's in shades