01-02-2013, 08:09 AM
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criticize my soloooooo
I recorded this about a day ago and I just wanted to get some advice and stuffs
 and its the first thing i record! c4c
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01-02-2013, 02:32 PM
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Sr Bartolomew Shredman IV
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Paris, France
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Is that Tornado Of Souls from megadeth?
I love that solo!  Best solo ever!The rhythm part was good, and solid. The solo part seemed a improvised, but it was out of scale a couple of time at the end and during the bend. The sweeping part seemed good to me I think you should work out slowly. You should play the rhythm part at 75% of the speed, or half speed, and play exactly the same part. I did it to learn megadeth solos: on guitar pro, I set the speed a lot slower. It's a good method to get better quickly ! Other than that I liked the editing, showing the rhythm part in a "thumbnail"! But stop moving so much, we can't see a thing!  C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1580672 |
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01-03-2013, 06:09 AM
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lol it thought it sounded like it too!! thank you i will work on that! i appreciate it!
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01-03-2013, 05:43 PM
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Awesome solo! kinda like what flaphead325 said about Megadeth. your solo reminds me of their music and I like that. Try adding a backing track with drums&bass and it would sound killer.
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01-03-2013, 06:04 PM
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People who annoy you
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Merritt, BC, Canada
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It was pretty good! A few of the bends were in the wrong places but for the most part the playing was pretty clean. Catchy intro riff, too. I wish the sound quality was better, webcams suck.
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01-03-2013, 11:43 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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I'm so proud of you for not using tons of distortion! You have some really cool riffs. Like everyone else said...watch your bends, make sure to stay in key with them and you'll sound much more solid. Also, may work on some slower riffs as well, soloing isn't about how fast you can play as much as it's about expression and setting a mood.
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01-04-2013, 08:01 PM
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Ha ha does sound very close to tornado of souls
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01-05-2013, 03:36 AM
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Thank you guys, I appreciate the feedback! I wish I could play the tornado of souls solo
 I recorded with a camera i bought for cheap, I should be getting better equipment very very soon but I will work on that and re-do it! Thanks!
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01-05-2013, 11:41 AM
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Heshmuggah
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Shillong, India.
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Very nice. But you should be a little careful in the faster sections. Some mis placed notes really stand out but apart from the mentioned bends and what not, everything is very smooth and catchy.
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