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Old 05-29-2013, 04:06 AM   #1
t0mm1_
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Original Proggy "Metal" song (GP5 & C4C)

Third song i have wrote for my band I would love to hear your opinions.
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Old 05-29-2013, 04:52 AM   #2
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Sounds totally like Tool. That's cool, but many parts seem to be a bit repetitive for me. Your main riff is played too often without a real variation. Try adding some variety and the song should be pretty good!
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Old 06-18-2013, 08:12 PM   #3
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I'm with Zaqq. the riffs themselves are really cool and sound like Tool (i love Tool, so you won me over on that part ) but its terribly repetitive. ill be honest, i skipped half of it because the other half was the same, and i already heard it. since its incredibly repetitive, yet has a lot of potential, ill give it a 7/10. in the meantime, could you also tell me what you think of my tab? i know it has a weird name, but theres a story behind it involving me and an a singer to one of my past bands
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