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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Anywhere But Here
This is one of the first few songs I ever wrote when I started writing last year, but I never really had the courage to show anyone any of them, so I figure I'll start with this one. Hope y'all like it.
------------------------------------------------------ Anywhere But Here Blue sky turns to starry night Dont know why but it feels so right Sittin' here on the roof of this old shed I got my friends on both sides And no one to tie us down I wouldnt want it any other way This is where I belong With my family and friends so close I'd go to the ends of the earth for them I would do anything This is my world, my home And I wouldnt wanna be Anywhere but here I've lived here all of eighteen years Through all the ups and downs, the fears and the tears I wouldnt change one single thing I've got everything I need in this little town They say, "Home is where the heart is" And I understand that now This is where I belong With my family and friends so close I'd go to the ends of the earth for them I would do anything This is my world, my home And I wouldnt wanna be Anywhere but here I could go anywhere in the world But I'd rather be here I'm where I belong With my family and my friends I would go anywhere Do anything for them This is my world, my home And I wouldnt wanna be No, I wouldnt wanna be Anywhere but here. -------------------------- (EDITED VERSION) Blue sky turns to starry night I dont know why but it feels so right Sittin' here on the roof of this old shed. Got my friends on both sides And no one to tie us down, I Wouldnt want it any other way. This is where I belong With my family and friends I'd go to the ends of the Earth for them And I know they'd do the same for me This is my world, my home And I wouldnt wanna be No I wouldnt wanna be Anywhere but here I've lived here eighteen years Through the ups and the downs But I wouldnt change one single thing They say that, "Home is where the heart is" Well, I think I understand that now, 'cause I've got everything right here This is where I belong With my family and friends I'd go to the ends of the Earth for them And I know they'd do the same for me This is my world, my home And I wouldnt wanna be No, I wouldnt wanna be Anywhere but here I could go anywhere in the world But I'd rather be right here I'm where I belong With my family and friends We'd do anything for each other Go to any lengths This is my world, my home And I've never felt so free So, I wouldnt wanna be No, I wouldnt wanna be Baby, I wouldnt wanna be Anywhere but here. Last edited by TigerLily18 : 12-06-2012 at 01:04 AM. |
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Join Date: Jul 2012
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This is so well written!
"Blue sky turns to starry night Dont know why but it feels so right Sittin' here on the roof of this old shed" "I've lived here all of eighteen years Through all the ups and downs, the fears and the tears I wouldnt change one single thing" These two verses are amazing! they show a lot of emotion, and they have something very relatable about them. your skills are great! keep it up ![]() |
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Thank you so much! I hope to have more work posted soon as well!
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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I've added the editted version that matches the guitar piece to my song. Check it out and see what y'all think. I'd love input!
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Join Date: Nov 2012
Location: west mids, england
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I really like it man. Emotional and well written, I relate! Where's the link to the guitar bit?
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