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Old 02-10-2013, 03:16 PM   #1
nunu
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Short 1:26 song idea, chill arctic monkeyish style music C4C

The title pretty much says it all. Just some chill music made with my acoustic guitar. Arctic monkeys feel to it like "despair in the departure lounge." Kind of grungy..

http://moism.bandcamp.com/track/goldencage
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Old 02-10-2013, 04:52 PM   #2
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I like it. Keep it short, sometimes when you try to make a song a respectable length you just ruin it.
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Old 02-10-2013, 05:36 PM   #3
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nunu,
The higher pitch synth/guitar right before the first vocals has a harsh tone for my ears, but I'm sensitive to the sort of thing. I like the drums & the melodies & the vocals. I wouldn't mind if you did a copy & paste job to make the song longer because I think it's too short in my opinion: I wouldn't get bored, I don't think. I like it for the most part. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1586943
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Old 02-11-2013, 09:00 PM   #4
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i liked it a lot, its sounds good short, uf u were to extend it a bit i wouldnt make it more than 2 mins at best, the melodies are nice just maybe soften up that synth thing before the vox its a tad bit harsh other than that its a sweet track! crit my stuff here!
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1585377
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Old 02-16-2013, 11:14 AM   #5
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i really like the drums and how the guitar came in. the way the high scale pitch came in with the accompanying acoustic was sick. im not a big fan of the vocals as im not fond of that style of music but when you say "in a golden cage" it starts to sound more on-key and suits the music. i also like the fill shortly following it. overall, its a good song. sounds kind of like something 'gorillaz' would do

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