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Old 06-10-2013, 09:50 PM   #1
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Post-hardcore/drone/Deftones-ish with a hint of Erra93

Started and finished writing this song tonight, came up with the first 2 bars on the guitar and did the rest in GP. It's very different from pretty much all of my other work

C4C as always, but please know I won't be able to respond during June 15-25th because of recording and practising for playing our first gig with the band. I will of course crit back though, just not during that time, but I guess that was obvious. I'm still going to keep this unnecessary text though.

Any criticism is appreciated, good or bad

Edit: new version with (hopefully) improved outro
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Old 06-11-2013, 02:42 AM   #2
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Upon first listen, I can only say that I enjoyed it very much. I'm going to go to bed, but I will listen again tomorrow and let you know if I have any constructive criticism.

...Nice work!
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Old 06-11-2013, 12:22 PM   #3
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Upon first listen, I can only say that I enjoyed it very much. I'm going to go to bed, but I will listen again tomorrow and let you know if I have any constructive criticism.

...Nice work!


Thanks mate! I've tried to improve the outro, any thoughts?
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Old 06-11-2013, 01:16 PM   #4
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I've listened to the first version again and the second version for the first time. I'm not a fan of sound of the MIDI choir aahs, but the notes and feeling of them work just fine for my ears.

I still think it's great. I wish I made it!
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Old 06-12-2013, 04:08 PM   #5
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I like it a lot! I can definitely see the Deftones influence.

My only real criticism is the mixing. Up the drums and bass, and forte fortissimo that shit.
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