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Old 04-05-2013, 12:48 PM   #1
pushkar000
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Hi guys, this song is about a friend of mine. she has a troubled family and her family issues drive her to wok hard. i tried to write about that.

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Iím sorry I couldnít hold you
Did nothing but watch you drown
I wanted to stand beside you
But my mind has chained me down

Where has he gone now
Weíre all alone now

So hold on sweet sister
We need you now
I need you now
Stay strong sweet sister
Donít let us down
Donít let me down

When everything fell down
I held my hand over your head
But time begins to call me now
And here I am, stuck in my bed

Where has he gone now
Weíre all alone now

So hold on brave daughter
We need you now
I need you now
Stay strong brave daughter
Donít let us down
Donít let me down

Once bitten, twice shy
Always beaten, never cry
Standing strong, head held high
All we want is to see you fly

He may not come back now
But weíll be together now
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Old 04-06-2013, 06:53 PM   #2
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Nice sentiment. I'd say that more specific details would make these better lyrics, so it's more about her specific situation. I do like it though. Are you going to play her the song?
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Old 04-07-2013, 06:53 AM   #3
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Nice sentiment. I'd say that more specific details would make these better lyrics, so it's more about her specific situation. I do like it though. Are you going to play her the song?


Thanks! That's true, I'll try to fit some more specific details in.
I haven't got any music for it, but I did send her the lyrics.
She said she was happy <3
Shes the female vocalist I mentioned in your song thread btw.

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Old 04-07-2013, 08:59 PM   #4
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Thanks! That's true, I'll try to fit some more specific details in.
I haven't got any music for it, but I did send her the lyrics.
She said she was happy <3
Shes the female vocalist I mentioned in your song thread btw.


Ah that's cool. I don't tend to write such personal lyrics myself, must be rewarding to write about such things directly.
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