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Old 03-13-2013, 08:45 AM   #1
Blanched in White Oars
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Location: Columbus, Ohio

L. rests herself on my lap,
after weeping loudly,
I think what hath God
wrought for us, it is chilling,

she says to me so very haunting
she says to me as if a priest
with outstretched arms.

A priest in the confessional.

She says to me
as if she is God.
High on Mt. Herob,
burning as a naked bush.

She says to me
as if pulled from my ribs
Drawing in agony;
apologetic & saccharine.

She says to me with struggling

muscles. L.’s fragile and
vulnerable body shakes

dispondent lips moves
she says to me,

“You are forgiven.”

and brother you're a hunter and you're right at home

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Old 03-13-2013, 06:04 PM   #2
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This was probably one of the most personal and powerful pieces I've read from you. I can't add anything else, I just loved reading this.
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