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Old 04-22-2012, 06:31 PM   #1
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Blues-Rock/ Pop tune (GP5/GP4, C4C)

So I know the title may say otherwise but I do know more than 4 chords :P
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Anyways the commisioner wanted a backing track that combines elements from blues-rock, pop and roots music. Tell me if I did a good job? Also what should I do/ fix to make it sound better ect.
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Old 04-23-2012, 12:29 AM   #2
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Really like the bass line you got going on, its active, fun and fits well. One thing I don't really care for is the drums but that may be because of guitar pro and not the actual stuff you got going on.
I really liked the guitar solo section although there was not 'guitar' solo the bass sounded good :P
But yeah, for what you were going for it sounded good. I liked it.
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Old 04-23-2012, 06:06 PM   #3
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Thanks man. Im actually deciding whether to write a solo down or leave it open for improv. Any thoughts?
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Old 04-23-2012, 06:42 PM   #4
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Hmm, I'd have to hear the solo, but what you have there is kind of neat too though.
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Old 04-29-2012, 08:58 PM   #5
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Sorry it took so long to get back to you...

I like this. Like it has been said, I like the bass riff. It branches off from the guitar part enough to not be boring, but still is it's own instrument... Some modern bands could learn that tactic (As could I).

I like a lot of the double time feels. They could have easily been left how the tempo was, but there's no fun, no excitement in that.

I, however, being the prog drummer, was not a huge fan of the verse toms. Personal opinion, but there's nothing breaking that bass feel, you know?

The only other thing I did not like is the transition at bar 70. It's good, but a bit abrupt.

Overall, I like it. A definite 8/10... And if you DO write a solo, I'm sure it'll be great.
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Old 12-25-2012, 01:14 PM   #6
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The bass line is from this song.
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Not bad.
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Old 12-25-2012, 07:39 PM   #7
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The bass line is from this song.
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Not bad.


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