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Old 02-15-2013, 04:09 PM   #1
link55588
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Suffering/Everything's Alright - Acoustic Demo - C4C

Hey this is an acoustic demo that will eventually and hopefully be recorded by my band, but not for a while, just kinda recorded it for reference

https://soundcloud.com/chris-ferran...ythings-alright

any critcs comments etc, are welcome and C4C also
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Old 02-16-2013, 12:49 AM   #2
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i liked the muting of the frets at the beginning. its also a nice little riff you got there and the way the voice came in with a haunting sound was pretty good. i really like the riff , its pretty catchy and it really carries the song. when the timing changes around 0:40 you did a good job but i think drums and bass would really help it and make the transition smoother. keep up the good stuff

c4c my song? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588042
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Old 02-16-2013, 11:51 AM   #3
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yes yes, thats what i was thinking too! im also playing around with the last part of the "suffering" part when the lyrics change from the usual ones, i might do a key change or something there, Thanks. Ill check yours out
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Old 02-18-2013, 01:25 AM   #4
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Interesting vocal effect, though I wanted them eventually to sound 'normal' after a while. Singing is good (just slightly pitchy at times though). Nice melodies. Guitar playing is fine. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1586943
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