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Old 11-09-2012, 02:46 AM   #1
Mr.Pink101
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Requim Aeternam Deo

This is unfinished, I've got several more verses I'm working on, but they're more conceptual, and I don't know how far I want to go in this piece to be honest. 10 points for the first person to guess my inspiration. Yes, it is a song, not a poem like my usual writing.

We break down the pillars and crumble the alters
that once held our glory so high out of reach
The marching of progress and faltering silence
as night closes in but we pierce it with speech
say;
"God is dead
And we are the ones that killed him
so rest your head
on these collapsing buildings
there's not much left here
only omnipotence decomposing in this tomb
we call a church"
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