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Old 11-02-2012, 02:39 AM   #1
Gaiad
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Tombstone

I'll mark this spot for you
Lay to rest all the memories
And take in a new breath
Why do cold words drop like autumn leaves

The grass lay wet with the dew of morn'
The fate unbeknownst until the sun rises
Still reaching for repeated days
That separate unknowing truth and reality

I'll stay by this Tombstone
Until the day it no longer stands to bare
The passing of repeated days
And no longer binds me here

As the sun begins it's descent
And forces you to cast your towering shadows
Where will you hide that brings you comfort
Even if the light once more will shine on you

By all means run your charade
Your pace will falter into all-seeing eyes
And at that point will understanding come
Or will your breath stagnate

I'll stay by this Tombstone
Until the day it no longer stands to bare
The passing of repeated days
And no longer binds me here




Just wrote this tonight, thoughts are appreciated.

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Old 11-02-2012, 09:35 PM   #2
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I like it a lot, what genre would it be?
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Old 11-07-2012, 05:35 PM   #3
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It's really solid lyrics. Clean and concise. Although I prefer a more spastic style of lyric I enjoyed these.
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Old 11-07-2012, 06:56 PM   #4
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I really like these, but I have a hard time feeling the emotion of them
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Old 11-10-2012, 01:24 AM   #5
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These are really nice...i can totally see it being a song. (or hear?) :P anyways, it feels very real to me.
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