01-16-2013, 06:51 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Azusa, CA
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"For A While"- Original Song
I was inspired by a recent heartache in my life.
So I wrote this. Feel free to comment. And feel free to check out the rest of the tunes on my soundcloud. "For A While" C4C
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01-17-2013, 09:08 PM
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Muchacho Moderno
Join Date: Dec 2012
Location: Deep in the Heart of Texas
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Nice and mellow, kinda like the chorusy intro.
0:39 - Like the weird vocal stylings 1:10 - Cops came by to stop my suicide attempt! 1:40 - My dog began to sob. I like the vocal stylings here I can hear a base line in my head - would fill it out. The vocals hold my attention, but the angsty lyrics are a little tough to swallow. Keep on writing and recording! Give a look at mine and kick my balls in return. http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1583381 DWS |
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01-18-2013, 12:03 AM
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Registered User
Join Date: Mar 2010
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tunasband,
Sorry about the heartache. Sometimes writing these sort of songs can be cathartic. Vibrato on the vocals is pretty intense, though it fits the mood, I suppose. Guitar sounds pretty good. Wish there wasn't the background noise, but not a big deal. Sad songs are not typically my favorites, though it's pretty good for that type of song. Please review my music at this link: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1581578 |
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