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I just started writing songs a week or two ago. This is the first one I liked enough to finish. Any help is appreciated!

Driving tears
twenty years in the making
try to be strong
feels so wrong

let him down
his own good
feels so wrong
really wish it could

band aid smile
covering up the pain
lonely struggle
this lifelong game
bandage fades
slip into the haze
push it all away
all away
all away

coming back
day after day
feels so right
I just might

memory stays
liquid phase
friends the same
don't know my bane

band aid smile
covering up the pain
lonely struggle
this lifelong game
bandage fades
slip into the haze
push it all away
all away
all away

Chains break free
hurt no more
rescue me
dial him up

band aid smile
covering up the pain
lonely struggle
this lifelong game
bandage fades
slip into the haze
bring it back to me
back to me
back to me


Rip it apart please