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Old 04-24-2013, 12:48 PM   #1
doubtfulsalmon
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agape.

infatuation
called for a kiss
on her Bostik lips.
i kneel and

Vomit

Concrete

At her

Feet.

with tongues
slaking lime,
i chokingly grit
and aggregate:

"Don't Bother Clearing Up"
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Old 04-24-2013, 12:51 PM   #2
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vomit concrete at here feet

Oh god I love it. I can imagine this being sung harmoniously over some sort of mix of lantlos and my bloody valentine.

also, is your UN a reference to Adams?
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Old 04-25-2013, 03:05 PM   #3
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thank you, and yes it is
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Old 04-25-2013, 09:29 PM   #4
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I really like it, there really isn't much to say as far as suggestions go.

would you mind giving mine a look?
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