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Old 12-05-2013, 02:41 PM   #1
M4g!c
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Some unfinished songs

Waking in tears again
I just wasted another day
I can't hold on

Stuck in my dreams again
I'm just focus on this place
It's just like hell
Only my world can understand me

I'll leave this place
I'm sick of feeling
Is there something you should say?
You took my breath away
I'm suffercating
Tell me what the hell is wrong with me?
This is not who I wanted to be
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Old 12-05-2013, 02:42 PM   #2
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I close my eyes and wish to sleep
I close my eyes and I pretend
Did I make the right choice
Or did I make fool of myself
Things aren't what I wish for
I don't have right to choose

Sometimes I wish we were together
Sometimes I wish I could hold your hand forever
Sometimes I wish you were still here with me
Sometimes I wish I wasn't so alone.

It's to late to make some things better
It's to late to ask my why
Why don't you understand
Why won't you let me go.
You can ask me million times.
Answer will be the same.

Sometimes I wish we were together
Sometimes I wish I could hold your hand forever
Sometimes I wish you were still here with me
Sometimes I wish I wasn't so alone.
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Old 12-22-2013, 03:53 PM   #3
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m4g those last lyrics are excellent try to add another verse it has the makings of a great song!
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Old 12-22-2013, 09:57 PM   #4
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Suffocating, not suffercating.
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