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Old 10-25-2013, 01:20 PM   #1
crazycory94
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Smile Hallelujah acoustic cover (C4C)



i did a rock cover of this a few weeks ago but deleted it because after watching it again, I wasn't happy with it. Hopefully this on is different

So if you want, tell me what you think here or on the youtube page. If you like it, sub and leave a link to yours and I'll do the same
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Old 10-25-2013, 01:47 PM   #2
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My personal opinion is that voice has potential. Your vowels need some work, and I would sing a half step higher, I would think that would make it sound better. The guitar playing was crisp and clean, so nice job on that. I would consider a vocal teacher, but your voice could have a soulful voice. Another thing I would work on is your breathing. It sounded like you were running out of air really fast, and a vocal teacher could help that. Right now it needs come work, but I hear potential in that voice.
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Old 10-25-2013, 01:57 PM   #3
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Thanks David! I'll work on it!
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Old 11-06-2013, 08:13 PM   #4
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Hey there!

I think you did a great job! I like it in that key and I think it fits your range well even with your cold. Keep it up! Subscribed!
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