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Old 08-04-2013, 06:42 AM   #1
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No Sleep

you wake me
your voice a warm summer storm
keeping pace with the dreams
i never asked for and could not believe
black blood still in my teeth
as you shake the nettles from my hair
with painted white lightning
underneath your eyes.
in some forgotten language
we now remember how to speak -
you tell me nothing leaves and no one dies;
but somehow the truth still is a lie
and even if you never woke me at all
that still keeps me up at night.
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Old 08-06-2013, 11:44 AM   #2
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hey stranger. nice to see you back.

this could be even longer, especially with the rhyme scheme
you are really all the things that are outside of you

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it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist

e-married to alaskan_ninja
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Old 08-14-2013, 01:21 AM   #3
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I tried playing this out in my head (Though I probably played it wrong) and the lyrics work out very well. Nice work!
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Old 08-15-2013, 04:59 PM   #4
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lovely and integral in a grand scheme of similar things
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
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