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RED 3 42.86%
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Old 12-18-2008, 02:10 PM   #1
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Move A Courteous Move

It's rather empty in this house.
Realistically, I suppose you could say it's full.
I mean, my mother, father, and little brother are downstairs,
But it feels empty
In a disassocociated kind of way.

I guess I've just always felt alone.
I lack the empathy to see where other people are coming from,
and the sympathy to care.

I've made misanthropy my religion.
Solitude is my sanctuary.
My temple.
My church.
My mosque.

I've made distancing myself my pilgrimage.
Apathy is my holy land.
My Jerusalem.
My Vatican City.
My Mecca.

The problem now with this is that i've been blasphemizing.
I've let my hatred of the world around me manifest
Into a warped, disallusioned self-loathing.
I've become obsessed with creating this shrouded enigma of complexity about myself.

I'm easier to understand than I let on, I suppose.
But if the world understands you, than you're just one of them.
And if I were one of them, than I'd be everything that I hate.
I already am, of course, but they can't know that.
If they knew that, than how could I pretend that i'm better than them?

It's a world constantly seeking conformity.
I actively seek dissonance.
You see everything trying to act in harmony.
I see a society of trite rules and pointless formality.

If I am nothing new, than I have nothing to give to the world.
If I have nothing to give to the world, than I have no purpose.
If I have no purpose, than there is no reason for existance.
If there is no reason for existance, than there should be no existance at all.

I'll just wait for the call.







Dear journal,

Today was the worst day of my life
I scored a fifty-eight on my advanced physics final
and it's bullsh*t because I had a cold,
My father said I had to go to school
we argued, but he still forced me

Things got worse after that when
I found my locker was broken into
and found my Les Paul Custom stolen,
Out of rage I punched the wall
and fractured my wrist,
I'm a f*ckin dumbass
because now I can't play football
for the remaining season

The only thing, or person I should say,
that lightened the situation is Kayla
Those sparkling sapphire eyes are to die for
and her voice killed my pain
and put the rest of my day at ease

Sincerely,


Chris


P.S. If I ever find who stole my Les Paul,
I'm goin to cut off every single finger
then disembowel him alive
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Old 12-18-2008, 02:29 PM   #2
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Sorry guys, but I didn't really like either of these. But Green had me put off from the get go. Red has much more... personality in it, though I couldn't quite get into it.

Red
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Old 12-18-2008, 02:29 PM   #3
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Old 12-18-2008, 02:35 PM   #4
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Old 12-18-2008, 06:52 PM   #5
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Mine was actually OTS and something a little different...
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Old 12-19-2008, 04:36 PM   #6
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Old 12-19-2008, 11:33 PM   #7
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I giv yhou credit man, I thougjtT YHOUR PIECE WAS pretty good when I first read itA, idindnt think that my piece woujld actua,ly giveit a matahc

excuse myw rithing im ferdrujhnk

and p.s.

when youijm gojnnA GET THAT MIMIC **** UPM ZANSA? i'VE BEEN WAITN TO FATCE THJAT MONKEY
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Old 12-20-2008, 01:50 AM   #8
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Waiting on a fly.

Marlowe to be exact. I'd hate to start with just one asshole missing his piece, and Dylan not being mimicked. I'll send him a PM tonight.
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Old 12-21-2008, 12:42 PM   #9
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Old 12-22-2008, 10:49 AM   #10
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Sorry for double posting, but we need a tie breaker ASAP
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Old 12-22-2008, 04:55 PM   #11
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Old 12-22-2008, 08:22 PM   #12
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