Go Back   UG Community @ Ultimate-Guitar.Com > Music > Recordings > Tabs & Chords
User Name  
Password
Search:

Reply
Old 01-18-2009, 08:47 AM   #1
salamander121
Drummer
 
salamander121's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Arran, West Scotland
Admist the Terror Pt.3 (Epilogue) <GP5, GP4, MIDI, C4C>

I decided to make a three song concept idea basically telling the story of a tropical-like forest planet being destroyed by a superweapon on a nearby moon. This is the ending, hopefully creating the image of a planet getting destroyed and being left with nothing as the natives to this plant escape.
I've decided to work my way backwards so I'll probably post a Pt.2 and Pt.1 depending whether I feel like it or not . Please leave any contructive critism. C4C.
Attached Files
File Type: zip Admist the Terror Pt.3 (Epilogue).zip (7.8 KB, 52 views)
__________________
My main band in which I play bass guitar: Touring Barcelona

My solo stuff: Finlay Cable (Soundcloud)
salamander121 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-18-2009, 08:57 AM   #2
Regression
Registered User
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Just listening now, will edit this with more crit/suggestions. In the 3rd bar change it to an Emaj maybe?

I personally would have done that and after trying it I think it sounds better, although it doesn't flow quite as well into the 4th bar.

Okay, listened to the rest.. It was all solid, I actually have no ral suggestions, the only real problem was, I completely lost focus.

Maybe it's jsut not my type of music, it sounds good, I just didn't find it very interesting. One suggestion could be make more use of dynamics. It gives pieces alot more liveliness, feeling.. apart from that I can't offer much in the way of improvements.

Last edited by Regression : 01-18-2009 at 09:04 AM.
Regression is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:51 PM.

Forum Archives / About / Terms of Use / Advertise / Contact / Ultimate-Guitar.Com © 2014
Powered by: vBulletin Version 3.0.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.