01-18-2009, 08:47 AM
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Drummer
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Arran, West Scotland
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Admist the Terror Pt.3 (Epilogue) <GP5, GP4, MIDI, C4C>
I decided to make a three song concept idea basically telling the story of a tropical-like forest planet being destroyed by a superweapon on a nearby moon. This is the ending, hopefully creating the image of a planet getting destroyed and being left with nothing as the natives to this plant escape.
 I've decided to work my way backwards so I'll probably post a Pt.2 and Pt.1 depending whether I feel like it or not  . Please leave any contructive critism. C4C. 
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01-18-2009, 08:57 AM
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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2007
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Just listening now, will edit this with more crit/suggestions. In the 3rd bar change it to an Emaj maybe?
I personally would have done that and after trying it I think it sounds better, although it doesn't flow quite as well into the 4th bar. Okay, listened to the rest.. It was all solid, I actually have no ral suggestions, the only real problem was, I completely lost focus. Maybe it's jsut not my type of music, it sounds good, I just didn't find it very interesting. One suggestion could be make more use of dynamics. It gives pieces alot more liveliness, feeling.. apart from that I can't offer much in the way of improvements. Last edited by Regression : 01-18-2009 at 09:04 AM. |
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