04-15-2009, 05:04 PM
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: Israel
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Writer of The Month - March - Carmel
Real Name: Carmel
Age: 26 Location: Tel Aviv, Israel Favourite Artists: Change on a daily basis. Today is an Elliot Smith day. Favourite poet/poem (published writer): Changes daily. Today I like this – Drunk as drunk on turpentine From your open kisses, Your wet body wedged Between my wet body and the strake Of our boat that is made of flowers, Feasted, we guide it - our fingers Like tallows adorned with yellow metal - Over the sky's hot rim, The day's last breath in our sails. Pinned by the sun between solstice And equinox, drowsy and tangled together We drifted for months and woke With the bitter taste of land on our lips, Eyelids all sticky, and we longed for lime And the sound of a rope Lowering a bucket down its well. Then, We came by night to the Fortunate Isles, And lay like fish Under the net of our kisses. (P. Neruda) Why do you write? Because good words unwritten are good words wasted. Favourite word(s): Northern. Favourite technique/style to write in: Rhyme schemes, free verse. What do you do especially, to find inspiration: Love. Your most recent work and reason behind it: Found a piece of paper with the draft of a little speech I wrote for my mom’s memorial. Made me remember stuff about the years we spent in hospitals. Tips for newer writers: Write original, because you are. What’s your goal in writing: The goal is writing. Final comments or thoughts: Thank you. Picture: As if. 
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04-15-2009, 05:12 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Iowa
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Sweet. Noticed your name in it and had to click. XD
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04-15-2009, 05:19 PM
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left & leaving
Join Date: Mar 2006
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elliott smith days are always the best days. congrats.
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04-15-2009, 05:20 PM
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Lets rent bikes from 1942
Join Date: May 2006
Location: In the deepest ocean, the bottom of the sea
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Quote:
I remember this one Quote:
<3 great job
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04-15-2009, 05:46 PM
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UG's Alex Lifeson
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Ontario, Canada
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I guess this means I'll have to go back and read your stuff this month, it must be real good! Congrats, you've always been one of my favourites to read.
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04-15-2009, 07:28 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Netherlands
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congratulations
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04-15-2009, 07:50 PM
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Weeow!
Join Date: Mar 2006
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congrats
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04-15-2009, 08:14 PM
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not an exact science
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: How did you know to come here tonight? What's that you hold and why is it so bright?
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congrats
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04-15-2009, 08:55 PM
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all time's good times
Join Date: Feb 2008
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You rock.
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On the eight day we spoke back...
let there be sound.
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04-15-2009, 08:56 PM
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Weeow!
Join Date: Mar 2006
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love that neruda poem by the way, one of my faves of his.
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04-15-2009, 09:06 PM
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S+L OG
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: under dirt-filled rainy nights with my socks stuck in the mud, yeah....
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04-15-2009, 09:09 PM
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Doin' DAT FUNKY DANCE
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Perth/Glasgow - Scotland
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omg corrupt!
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04-15-2009, 09:40 PM
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th.
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: the alley at dawn
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^this.
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04-16-2009, 12:48 AM
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congrats.
Everytime you post three pieces in a month, you deserve at least a chance to win. This was a good month to win with .
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04-16-2009, 05:17 AM
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Bad Santa
Join Date: May 2006
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04-16-2009, 07:08 AM
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I don't like The Misfits.
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Manchester, UK
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I've been waiting for someone to include some Neruda in one of these. Congrats.
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04-16-2009, 04:10 PM
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mon titre d'utilisateur
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: In the bucket at the end of time.
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Carmel is Zombie Mary.
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マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー じーんせいはっわんつー！ぱんち・・・ "Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching |
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