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Old 10-31-2009, 11:08 PM   #1
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Bla-bla-bla Untitled Tech/Prog Death Metal (GP4/GP5/MIDI C4C)

This is something I've been writing for the past 2 days. It's mostly me just coming up with random shit on my guitar, perfecting it, and putting it into GP and writing bass and drums to fit. I am not following any scales, just playing random hammer-on's in order to attempt to sound cool. This is by no means finished or perfect, I'm just trying to get an honest opinion. C4C as usual.
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Old 11-01-2009, 11:43 AM   #2
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Awesome work, can hear influence from necrophagist ! You have done great work till now, but solo might be difficult to sound awesome.

Part A - totally necrophagist! Reminds me of epitaph - 5/5.
Part B - a little bit too noisy. Too high notes. 2/5.
Part C - Harmonics were a little bit dull. 3/5.
Part D - there were a bit stupid notes, but overall good. 4/5.
Part E - Awesome work. Melodic and brutal! Last two bars sounded like children of bodom.
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Old 11-01-2009, 12:12 PM   #3
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Thanks for the crit. Ya I can imagine the solo being a little bit difficult, I might break the song down and make it slow-ish. I critted the Contradiction Evidence piece.
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Old 11-01-2009, 03:51 PM   #4
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Hey man

I decided to add a few bars in at the end, i hope you like

I donno about the bass i added in, not very good but oh wells, hope ya like
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Aw man, that's awesome ultrasonic. Shit, If you would have showed me that sooner, i already started writing after that. I know I will put those 2 riffs in there somewhere. I might extend my solo with that too. Thanks man.
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Aw man, that's awesome ultrasonic. Shit, If you would have showed me that sooner, i already started writing after that. I know I will put those 2 riffs in there somewhere. I might extend my solo with that too. Thanks man.


Thanks Im adding more as we speak, I think i used one of your riffs again somewhere amongst it, but so far it sounds okes

Ill post again once Ive added more

I can really see this being a song

Edit: Done, I finished it, sorta lol I added a nice Clean Section complete with a solo, which took ages for me to get to agree with the guitar behind it I hope you like
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Old 11-01-2009, 06:51 PM   #7
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Hah. Wow man, you can have the song lol.
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Old 11-02-2009, 10:52 AM   #8
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Thanks Im adding more as we speak, I think i used one of your riffs again somewhere amongst it, but so far it sounds okes

Ill post again once Ive added more

I can really see this being a song

Edit: Done, I finished it, sorta lol I added a nice Clean Section complete with a solo, which took ages for me to get to agree with the guitar behind it I hope you like


Post gp4 file plz xDD?
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Post gp4 file plz xDD?


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