12-08-2009, 12:49 AM
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Tabs & Chords: Instrument Ideas Thread [IID]
I couldn't come up with a better name for this kind of thread.
Need help with a better intro? Do you have problems writing drum fills? Need a second brain or insight on a song you have created? Need opinions on certain parts? Want some ideas for a song? This is what this thread is about. Basically, I have made this thread for people that are stuck in their songs and need someone to help them out. For example, some people can't write drum parts for their life, so you can ask someone in this thread if they could help you or write drum parts for your song (optional). Steps to follow! 1. Write down the problem or specific help needed. 2. Attach the GP file 3. Done. NOTE: Make sure to thank the person who helped you and the people that attempted to help out. NOTE 2: This thread is not for critiquing pieces. Last edited by The Arsis : 12-08-2009 at 12:50 AM. |
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12-08-2009, 06:00 AM
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UG's only Holo
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I'm always up for writing drumtracks
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12-08-2009, 06:06 AM
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Hang on, so do we download the attached file and edit it or something and then re-upload it?
or do we just listen and make suggestions?
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12-08-2009, 10:58 AM
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Crappy? My friend told me that bar 3 sounds like shit, and is ****ing bad. Do you think the same way? What's wrong with it? I like it myself, but maybe I don't see the problem. Help plz ^^!
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12-08-2009, 12:21 PM
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UG's only Holo
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ok, there are 2 things about that: 1. The timing isn't really off, but I fixed the first 5 notes to make it a bit more fluent, while keeping that...chaotic feel 2. In contrast to the other bars, this one doesn't sound really classical, so I tweaked 2 notes. Not the best solution, but I hope it's giving you some hints. other than that, the thing sounds pretty cool, keep it up. Quote:
I don't know what kind of music you are going for. If it'S just and intro for any kind of metal song you could easily start with a heavy riff based on what you already have right away. If you want to write a slower instrumental piece, you can either keep the ryhthm you have and change its key, or find a fitting chord to continue. Maybe Cm or Asus2, depending on the atmosphere.
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12-08-2009, 02:04 PM
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Yeah, any kind of music is fine really, just thought that up and wanted to go with whatever it would lead into, thanx for the ideas though |
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12-08-2009, 03:24 PM
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May I have gp4? And thank's really ! |
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12-08-2009, 04:31 PM
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..is a hot 7 year old boy
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Here ya go:  EDIT: this is thorbor's version btw, I just transposed it to GP4, further than that I have nothing to do with the tab  |
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12-08-2009, 05:14 PM
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Similar to Rectangles
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I nominate with a heavy heart MaidenPriest666's tearjerking "Nigga Gimme a Breakdown" for a complete and utter overhaul in the drum section.
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1240729 Please help this poor man. |
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12-08-2009, 05:20 PM
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UG's only Holo
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12-08-2009, 05:32 PM
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Thanks for thorbor and ultimate-slash! If you want to hear what I did with "bar 3" go look for "Song of the Siren". It progressive death metal (I think.)
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12-08-2009, 06:16 PM
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You can do both. Quote:
You need his consent from the songwriter. You can't just post songs you think needs help. Please, don't do this again. Last edited by The Arsis : 12-08-2009 at 06:21 PM. |
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12-08-2009, 06:35 PM
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excellent idea arsis, i think this thread will turn out well.
annyyways..... i can write some pretty badass shit, but can never write leads/solos in key. basically all im asking is can someone give me an idea of a solo to play on these two songs? im not saying write me a solo so i can steal it, just a general idea to build off of. i tend to learn from watching whats going on. both of the songs are labelled where the solo starts and ends, usually when we practice I just freeball it. go hard on the solo if you so desire, i can rock some sweep picking and basically every tool i need to write a dope solo, i just dont possess the ability to solo in key. neither of the songs have drums either if someone is feeling bored and feels the need to do the drums then go right ahead. thanks for all the help guys.
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12-08-2009, 09:42 PM
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I did some drumming parts for majority of your song. Tell me what you think. Last edited by The Arsis : 12-09-2009 at 12:20 AM. |
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12-09-2009, 01:45 AM
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I need some mads advice for this piece I'm writing, I need to know whether the structure holds up properly, and I need advice on how to end the damn thing, this piece has been modified endlessly by me and I just don't know where to go with it anymore.
Any help would be appreciated, and I'd be glad to help back on one of your pieces. |
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12-09-2009, 06:33 AM
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lol my tearjerking song, its ok u can use it as a ""good" example"
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12-09-2009, 09:17 AM
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Seems like a good idea for a thread. I'll be sure to contribute sometime.
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I'd assume you are aiming this at those uploading, rather than those helping. Surely some critique would go down well if there really isn't anything that needs ammending. |
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12-09-2009, 01:00 PM
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UG's only Holo
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Also, in the second song you have the same chord progression going on for over 50 bars, even if you cover that with vocals and leads, it's still kinda lame. Other than that the songs remind me of Amon Amarth. The second one could sound good with dimmu borgir like keys, especially in teh first half of the song. Quote:
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