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Old 11-18-2014, 12:32 PM   #1
DeepBullet
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L'Illusion (dont worry, it's in english)

L’Illusion

Have you ever run away
so fast you couldn’t cry
so change your mind
change your view
change your heart
change yourself
I changed myself

Have you given a penny
maybe traded your thoughts
so change our words
change our love
change our touch
change our time
changed our time

CHORUS:
We wanted the same but could never have it
and we tried the same but would never make it
Give our time back
Take our souls back

Don’t look, don't go back again
that’s what the mirror said
so change my mind
change my love
change my heart
change my fears
changed my tears

We wanted the same but could never have it
and we tried the same but would never make it
Give our time back
Take our souls back

I wanted the same but could never have it
and I tried the same but would never make it
Give our time back
Take our souls back

Feel free to criticize whatever as long as it's a constructive critic. I dont know much about songwriting and this is one of my many songs I only write for myself since the sound I'm looking for is something like Muse-KoL (because of times album)-ish.
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