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Old 10-07-2014, 03:44 PM   #1
Jammydude44
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Exits

the light is getting cold
am I bright or am I old?
they all dance now pretty weird
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance now

this night is getting morning
all over itself, should I stall it?
they all flirt now pretty weird
pay heed to dirt now
pay heed to dirt now

and I'm left turning off all the lights
last one out the door

am I in the way?
a toll booth for your soul
give me what you want to lose
and I'll patch up all the holes

they all dance now pretty weird
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance now

and I'm left turning off all the lights
last one out the door

am I the drink you want?
last order, last order
just one for the road
take you past the border

and I'm left turning off all the lights
last one out the door

stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance now
stuck in a trance


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Old 10-16-2014, 11:57 PM   #2
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this is pretty neat. at first i was hesitant about a few things, but the more i read it, the more i like it. some of the rhymes could be cleaned up and a bit more subtle, but that will come with time.

thanks for posting. i enjoyed this.
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Old 10-17-2014, 11:55 PM   #3
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