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Old 06-30-2010, 02:48 PM   #1
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[GP5] Hubris (Alternative)

C4C.

The verses and choruses are mostly lyric based, so they may get a bit boring. If you want to be able to hear the lyrics over it, feel free to read or sing along.

Verse

A mile of interference,
but I've found a way to cheat;
the smiles can never be forced,
we're selling sincerity.

The beauty lies in innocence,
and innocence would never lie;
the safety lies in impotence,
and you don't dare question why.

Chorus
A comedown just so beautiful,
outweighing anchors of pride and shame;
the lightning drops down all around us,
and yet we act the same.

A comedown just so beautiful,
and as we play our game;
feeling so untouchable,
the lightning's much too tame.

Verse
The moment becomes legendary,
one of many, and to be fair;
not the proudest, nor most heroic,
but the one that rhymes in pairs.

The beauty lies in helplessness,
in sweat and labored breaths;
the danger lies in selfishness,
clenched tight against my chest.

Chorus
A comedown just so beautiful,
outweighing anchors of pride and shame;
the lightning drops down all around us,
and yet we act the same.

A comedown just so beautiful,
and as we play our game;
feeling so untouchable,
the lightning's much too tame.

Bridge
Bleed with passion.
Bleed with passion.
Bleed with passion.
Bleed with passion.

Bleed with passion.
Bleed with passion.
Bleed with passion.
Bleed with passion.

Chorus
A comedown just so beautiful,
outweighing anchors of pride and shame;
the lightning drops down all around us,
and yet we act the same.

A comedown just so beautiful,
and as we play our game;
feeling so untouchable,
the lightning's much too tame.
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Old 06-30-2010, 09:26 PM   #2
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Pretty awesome song. The intro was cool, and the progressions throughout the song were awesome. I think you should add a bit off variation, maybe fit in a few different chords, cause it seems to be a little repeating. The outro was good, as well as the post chorus at bar 41. Overall, a great song, and the lyrics were sweet, but it just needs a couple of changes
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Old 07-02-2010, 05:12 PM   #3
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Very nice song, it really builds well. The overlays in the bridge and the outro are one of the coolest things I've ever heard. The first verse is a bit odd though, because the drums seem way too strong and drown out the guitar. That might just be a product of the RSE though. The chorus could be a little stronger as well imo, right now it doesn't really stand out as the chorus and starts to get a little bland towards the end. Maybe the distortion should be emphasized or some form of soloing could be added above it.

Overall though it's a very impressive work.
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