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Old 07-20-2010, 12:46 PM   #1
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Seeping Through The Tips Of My Fingers (Prog Rock GP5 GP4 C4C)

My latest piece, crits appreciated.

Also this song is heavily influenced by a recent shroom trip so the lyrics might not make much sense.
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Old 07-20-2010, 01:24 PM   #2
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That was excellent. I did not find many major faults with it at all. I suppose it does lack variety somewhat as you only have five different themes which you recycle with some slight alterations later on. Still, I found all of the riffs to be very enjoyable and well written, so I would not consider the song repetitive at all. I also quite enjoyed the bird tweeting, I thought they were a magnificent addition to the song. I'm sorry if I can not give better criticism but as I said there is not a lot I would change at all.
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Old 07-20-2010, 01:51 PM   #3
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Reserving this post for a crit, which I will do when I get home from work tonight!
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Old 07-20-2010, 05:07 PM   #4
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Pretty damn good. Trippy as hell. Love it.
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Old 07-21-2010, 11:31 AM   #5
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I really like the beggening,
The only problem I have so far is at 21, the transfer to 88bpm sounds really sudden. Try bridging the two signatures slowly.
That's seriously the only problem I can find. Whenever it switches to 88bpm it sounds strange.
Overall, REALLY GOOD. 9.5/10


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